At last it's done! I've written a whole new first chapter. It's still a bit rough, as almost all of my chapters are (just getting my defence in first), but it does run from start to finish. But is it any good? Soon, I will know. Noel the Ultimate Proofreader and Solvey will be getting emails containing this new beginning. And Becca, too! Becca is one of my friends from work. At a mere 22, she is bordering on the insane - erm, I mean she would like to become a writer lol I've tried to persuade her to join Litopia, but only time will tell if Becca really does want to join the ranks of the self-harming insane. Not sure her husband Craig would cope too well with a pen-wielding Becca, either, but she would at least be staying in a lot more!!!!!!
I'd like more opinions, but I feel that Rich has to concentrate on his new work. He needs to focus, as there's a lot at stake for him right now.
Now I have to concern myself with a possible rewrite of the beginning of the fourth chapter (won't take long) and the movement into the rest of the story.
Onward!
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